Persuasive writing

I'm not for nor against letting students dye their hair what colour they want. It's up to then in the fact of what they want their hair to look like. I say this in perspective of a student who knows people dying they're hair then have the confidence to stand up for themselves and to let their true colours out, but it has also distracted them and the others around them from what they’re supposed to be doing.

By letting students dye their hair what colour they want could help build their confidence to stand up for themselves.  For example,  people who dye their have more confidence in the fact of it can hide something they don't want people seeing.  I say this in the fact of seeing people who dye their hair and their confidence started to saw.

Letting students dye their hair what colour they want can not only help with confidence,  but it can be a way of letting their true colours out. For instance, people who dye their hair strange or " out of it" colours normally not afraid to let people see who they are or what they believe in. I believe that students should be able to dye their if it lets them show who they are on the inside.

But like I said I'm not for nor against letting students dye the hair what colour they want but depending on what colour your hair is, it could be quite distracting to others around you.  Like, say you dye your hair bright pink or green or blue you could be distracting others with how bright it is. Soon teachers might say it wrong to dye your hair unnatural colours is not good.  

But like I said  I'm not for nor against letting students dye their hair what colour. It's up to then in the fact of what they want their hair to look like. I say this in perspective of a student who knows people dying they're hair then have the confidence to stand up for themselves and to let their true colours out, but it has also distracted them and the others around them from what they’re supposed to be doing.

Dying your hair can be a good thing but it all depends on the colour.